Monday, June 6, 2011

Hit it Jack

Like an old folk song

I've heard these harsh chords before

time to hit the road

8 comments:

Jingle said...

incredible Haiku,

Cheers.
:)

Anonymous said...

Fantastic haiku it conveys so much in so few lines

davidrheins said...

thanks for the kind words!

Anonymous said...

Nice haiku- love the title

Local Local Seattle said...
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Unknown said...

Fantastic haiku! ~ Rose

davidrheins said...

thanks homegreenhome and C Rose

'preciate the comments

Kiran Bashir Ahmad said...

Nice imagery