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Left to rust in weedson the cool banks of the Gorgewrecked from your life's work
Patrick Brickley writes:" Where has my paint gone / Why can't I drive down the road / The sun hurts me now //
sunrise forlast summers demolitionderby winner
your race has been runstripped of wheels shot full of holeslife left you a wreck
Good one! Love the picture!
Thanks Marbles. Hope to see you back here again soon. New work going up all the time!
awesome Haiku....the fun part of poets rally is; if you visit others, you have fun, otherwise, ..Happy Rally.Glad to see you share and sign agreement.
is this a metaphor for those of us that were left behind in the rat race? :)nice work!
Interesting and a little depressing, such is the fate of some, not always by their own doing.
Excellent haiku =)
Incredible poem and photo. That rusty car begs to be painted (on canvas that is).
Wonderful.ZQ
invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,smiles.hope to see your in.Happy Saturday.
Great one. I enjoyed reading it.
DSnake -- maybe...Thanks Jack!Jingle -- will do!
Sometimes I feel like that car.I really like these short, crisp poems, and their accompanying images.David
Anointedruins -- Yes, life's a long strange trip, with lots of pot holes and fender benders along the route.
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Patrick Brickley writes:
" Where has my paint gone / Why can't I drive down the road / The sun hurts me now //
sunrise for
last summers demolition
derby winner
your race has been run
stripped of wheels shot full of holes
life left you a wreck
Good one! Love the picture!
Thanks Marbles. Hope to see you back here again soon. New work going up all the time!
awesome Haiku....
the fun part of poets rally is; if you visit others, you have fun, otherwise, ..
Happy Rally.
Glad to see you share and sign agreement.
is this a metaphor for those of us that were left behind in the rat race? :)
nice work!
Interesting and a little depressing, such is the fate of some, not always by their own doing.
Excellent haiku =)
Incredible poem and photo. That rusty car begs to be painted (on canvas that is).
Wonderful.
ZQ
invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
smiles.
hope to see your in.
Happy Saturday.
Great one. I enjoyed reading it.
DSnake -- maybe...
Thanks Jack!
Jingle -- will do!
Sometimes I feel like that car.
I really like these short, crisp poems, and their accompanying images.
David
Anointedruins -- Yes, life's a long strange trip, with lots of pot holes and fender benders along the route.
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